Do I still have to ramble now even though I've been somewhat hysterical on the phone? XP
Aside from the usual it's-great-and-fabulous-so-great-job-and-I-love-it you know it's coming from me, well~ it's brilliant~! *sama aj, dodol...*
You kept them in character reeeeaaaalllyyyy well, and Allen's confession was a nice surprise at the beginning of this fic. And of course, the mention of the 14th was the best reason for him to confess~ XDD But, Kanda's reaction is just. Just. You did him justice so yeah, it was amazingly epic. XDDDDD
I told you I went a bit "zzzz..." at the mention of them sharing a blanket--thought it could be too fast for them and maybe sappy--but then I read on and was all "Scratch that, I'm a puddle of goo." XDDD I mean, that kind of scene sounds a bit sappy to me, AND I STILL THINK IT SHOULD BE, but you wrote it so well that they're still IC and melted me in the end, so that was WINNNNNNN~~~~
Oh, pink, flowery blanket. It just had to be pink and flowery, no? XDDDD *guling2*
Btw, last line WINS. XDDDDDD Oh Kanda.
Btw, I'll just e-mail the summary you asked me, ne? LJ is being a b**ch, really. I have a hard time posting. TT-TT
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Date: 2009-12-26 02:35 am (UTC)Aside from the usual it's-great-and-fabulous-so-great-job-and-I-love-it you know it's coming from me, well~ it's brilliant~! *sama aj, dodol...*
You kept them in character reeeeaaaalllyyyy well, and Allen's confession was a nice surprise at the beginning of this fic. And of course, the mention of the 14th was the best reason for him to confess~ XDD But, Kanda's reaction is just. Just. You did him justice so yeah, it was amazingly epic. XDDDDD
I told you I went a bit "zzzz..." at the mention of them sharing a blanket--thought it could be too fast for them and maybe sappy--but then I read on and was all "Scratch that, I'm a puddle of goo." XDDD I mean, that kind of scene sounds a bit sappy to me, AND I STILL THINK IT SHOULD BE, but you wrote it so well that they're still IC and melted me in the end, so that was WINNNNNNN~~~~
Oh, pink, flowery blanket. It just had to be pink and flowery, no? XDDDD *guling2*
Btw, last line WINS. XDDDDDD Oh Kanda.
Btw, I'll just e-mail the summary you asked me, ne? LJ is being a b**ch, really. I have a hard time posting. TT-TT