Yes, the ending is a bit abrupt (or a little rush for my liking). But it still okay, and i always love jealous Tezuka^^
Keep writing, no one can make their first or second fic perfect. (You still better than me, i even not dare to make any ZukaFuji fic >_<) I'm sure you can make a better fic^___^
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Date: 2007-12-22 05:24 pm (UTC)But it still okay, and i always love jealous Tezuka^^
Keep writing, no one can make their first or second fic perfect.
(You still better than me, i even not dare to make any ZukaFuji fic >_<)
I'm sure you can make a better fic^___^