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[FANFIC--TezuFuji] What Your Eyes Saying 01
Title: What Your Eyes Saying
Author: a1y-puff
Genre: General/romance… maybe…
Rating: G
Sumary: Tezuka and Fuji could communicate with their eyes. but sometimes, they still need words.
Disclaimer: I do not own Prince of Tennis.
A/N: Well, I tried to make a longer story of TezuFuji than my previous stories xD this won’t be very long though. I actually meant tit to be a one-shot, but it’s a bit too long for a one-shot, so I divided it onto three chapters, just for easy-reading.
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-Chapter 1-
It was never a secret to the Seigaku Tennis club members--especially the regulars--that their captain and the tensai could communicate with their eyes. Sometimes, they would wonder how the two do it, but not even Inui could figure out.
“There’s not enough data on them to figure out how they do that and what they’re talking about in their telepathic communication. And it’s 89.7% chances that they have a sixth sense so as not to let me take enough data on them,” would be Inui’s explanation if anyone ever asked him that.
That day, as usual, they had practice. As usual, Tezuka did not tolerate any lateness. As usual, those who were late were already running their laps, when Fuji walked calmly into the court.
Tezuka swiftly threw a small glare at him, while the tensai only smiled in respond.
“Fuji,” Tezuka called to the tensai with a low tone of voice. To the other members, that kind of tone was intimidating, but it seemed that didn’t work on Fuji who stayed calm and kept his smile displayed to the captain.
“I know. Will 10 laps do?” Fuji asked calmly.
Tezuka stared at him, with his eyebrows twitched a little, saying ‘it-should-be-twenty-laps-and-you-know-it’.
Fuji calmly approached Inui, taking a glass containing some greenish liquid form the taller boy and promptly emptied the glass in one, big gulp. His brows frowned a little at the weird feeling attacking his throat and stomach. He never drank this juice before. A new recipe, he figured.
He then smiled at his captain, eyes still closed, but it contained a rather long message for Tezuka, which only the buchou himself seemed to understand.
‘That should do for another 10 laps, ne? It doesn’t tasted pretty good actually, I feel a little sick here.’
Tezuka sighed in defeat. “Fine, 10 laps, now.”
Fuji did not answer, and just gave Tezuka his usual smile. Before he started his laps, though, he said to Inui, “I like your previous juice better. This one’s has a weird taste. Maybe you could add some wasabi in?”, and without waiting for an answer, he started to jog out of the court.
“But Inui’s juices are always tasted weird, even without any wasabi added to them,” Kikumaru shuddered, he never understand what kind of tongue Fuji have.
Tezuka just kept silent as he watched Fuji ran his laps. It’s rather unusual for him to be late. There must be a reason, but Tezuka needed to treat everyone equally here, so he had to assign him the laps. And he knew Fuji understand that.
“Ah, I just remember,” Kikumaru suddenly approach Tezuka. “You know, Fujiko was absent after lunch break for about 20 minutes to take a nap because he was kinda dizzy,” he explained. “He probably went to the nurse office to take his medicine before going here.”
Tezuka stared at his teammate and sigh, silently blamed Kikumaru for not saying that sooner, and blamed Fuji who should’ve said something if he wasn’t feeling well.
“Fuji, you can stop now!” Tezuka shouted a little louder than his usual tone, for Fuji was a little too far from where he was standing.
Fuji stopped running, and walked slowly to his captain. He gave the smile that seemed questioning.
‘Why do you stop me? I still have another seven laps’
Tezuka stared at him in rather demanding eyes.
‘You should’ve told me if you’re not feeling well.’
Fuji’s lips curved into one of those ‘I’m sorry’ smile, though he didn’t look like he was sorry at all.
Tezuka closed his eyes in defeat, and sighed.
‘Whatever, just stay here.’
Fuji just smiled a little before walking slowly to his usual standing position: beside the captain.
Kikumaru shrugged a little before leaving the two. He never knew that silence actually could talk that much, as he would never know what those two were saying.
-oOo-
“So, as you guys may already know, we will have a training camp starting tomorrow. Be ready, okay?” Oishi announced after practice.
The regulars seemed excited. Well, it has the name of training camp, but it seemed they took it as a vacation. Oishi then turned to Fuji.
“You’ll come, ne?” he asked, with a concern look. Kikumaru had told him that Fuji seemed unwell.
“Of course. I’m not that sick. It’s just lack of sleep, you know. I’ll be fine in no time,” Fuji smiled.
“Good, then. You should get more sleep tonight, ne?” the mother of Seigaku said in a rather commanding tone. Fuji chuckled a bit, somewhat happy with his friend’s concern.
“Alright then, dismiss,” Tezuka said to the regulars. Soon, the boys were bidding each other goodbyes as they walked out of the clubhouse.
Fuji was about to sling his bag to his shoulder, when he found Tezuka’s eyes were fixed on him.
‘Don’t push yourself.’
Fuji could only smile as a reply to his captain before walking out of the room. As soon as he stepped out, though, his heartbeat was fastened a bit. Again, Tezuka just gave him this certain look that was somewhat… different.
It’s been a while since Fuji noticed the different stare Tezuka would give him from time to time. Not that it was too often though, so Fuji was uncertain of what the stare might mean. But it seemed like that certain look became more frequent lately. And somehow he felt certain warmth from that stare.
Yet he still had no idea of how to interpret the stare.
-ooTBCoo-
A/N: So, how was it? Hope you like the opening XD
I actually had finished this story but I may make some adjustment depends on the responds, so please do review and tell me what you think, ne?
Chapter two will be accompanied by a fanart ^___^
Author: a1y-puff
Genre: General/romance… maybe…
Rating: G
Sumary: Tezuka and Fuji could communicate with their eyes. but sometimes, they still need words.
Disclaimer: I do not own Prince of Tennis.
A/N: Well, I tried to make a longer story of TezuFuji than my previous stories xD this won’t be very long though. I actually meant tit to be a one-shot, but it’s a bit too long for a one-shot, so I divided it onto three chapters, just for easy-reading.
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-Chapter 1-
It was never a secret to the Seigaku Tennis club members--especially the regulars--that their captain and the tensai could communicate with their eyes. Sometimes, they would wonder how the two do it, but not even Inui could figure out.
“There’s not enough data on them to figure out how they do that and what they’re talking about in their telepathic communication. And it’s 89.7% chances that they have a sixth sense so as not to let me take enough data on them,” would be Inui’s explanation if anyone ever asked him that.
That day, as usual, they had practice. As usual, Tezuka did not tolerate any lateness. As usual, those who were late were already running their laps, when Fuji walked calmly into the court.
Tezuka swiftly threw a small glare at him, while the tensai only smiled in respond.
“Fuji,” Tezuka called to the tensai with a low tone of voice. To the other members, that kind of tone was intimidating, but it seemed that didn’t work on Fuji who stayed calm and kept his smile displayed to the captain.
“I know. Will 10 laps do?” Fuji asked calmly.
Tezuka stared at him, with his eyebrows twitched a little, saying ‘it-should-be-twenty-laps-and-you-know-it’.
Fuji calmly approached Inui, taking a glass containing some greenish liquid form the taller boy and promptly emptied the glass in one, big gulp. His brows frowned a little at the weird feeling attacking his throat and stomach. He never drank this juice before. A new recipe, he figured.
He then smiled at his captain, eyes still closed, but it contained a rather long message for Tezuka, which only the buchou himself seemed to understand.
‘That should do for another 10 laps, ne? It doesn’t tasted pretty good actually, I feel a little sick here.’
Tezuka sighed in defeat. “Fine, 10 laps, now.”
Fuji did not answer, and just gave Tezuka his usual smile. Before he started his laps, though, he said to Inui, “I like your previous juice better. This one’s has a weird taste. Maybe you could add some wasabi in?”, and without waiting for an answer, he started to jog out of the court.
“But Inui’s juices are always tasted weird, even without any wasabi added to them,” Kikumaru shuddered, he never understand what kind of tongue Fuji have.
Tezuka just kept silent as he watched Fuji ran his laps. It’s rather unusual for him to be late. There must be a reason, but Tezuka needed to treat everyone equally here, so he had to assign him the laps. And he knew Fuji understand that.
“Ah, I just remember,” Kikumaru suddenly approach Tezuka. “You know, Fujiko was absent after lunch break for about 20 minutes to take a nap because he was kinda dizzy,” he explained. “He probably went to the nurse office to take his medicine before going here.”
Tezuka stared at his teammate and sigh, silently blamed Kikumaru for not saying that sooner, and blamed Fuji who should’ve said something if he wasn’t feeling well.
“Fuji, you can stop now!” Tezuka shouted a little louder than his usual tone, for Fuji was a little too far from where he was standing.
Fuji stopped running, and walked slowly to his captain. He gave the smile that seemed questioning.
‘Why do you stop me? I still have another seven laps’
Tezuka stared at him in rather demanding eyes.
‘You should’ve told me if you’re not feeling well.’
Fuji’s lips curved into one of those ‘I’m sorry’ smile, though he didn’t look like he was sorry at all.
Tezuka closed his eyes in defeat, and sighed.
‘Whatever, just stay here.’
Fuji just smiled a little before walking slowly to his usual standing position: beside the captain.
Kikumaru shrugged a little before leaving the two. He never knew that silence actually could talk that much, as he would never know what those two were saying.
-oOo-
“So, as you guys may already know, we will have a training camp starting tomorrow. Be ready, okay?” Oishi announced after practice.
The regulars seemed excited. Well, it has the name of training camp, but it seemed they took it as a vacation. Oishi then turned to Fuji.
“You’ll come, ne?” he asked, with a concern look. Kikumaru had told him that Fuji seemed unwell.
“Of course. I’m not that sick. It’s just lack of sleep, you know. I’ll be fine in no time,” Fuji smiled.
“Good, then. You should get more sleep tonight, ne?” the mother of Seigaku said in a rather commanding tone. Fuji chuckled a bit, somewhat happy with his friend’s concern.
“Alright then, dismiss,” Tezuka said to the regulars. Soon, the boys were bidding each other goodbyes as they walked out of the clubhouse.
Fuji was about to sling his bag to his shoulder, when he found Tezuka’s eyes were fixed on him.
‘Don’t push yourself.’
Fuji could only smile as a reply to his captain before walking out of the room. As soon as he stepped out, though, his heartbeat was fastened a bit. Again, Tezuka just gave him this certain look that was somewhat… different.
It’s been a while since Fuji noticed the different stare Tezuka would give him from time to time. Not that it was too often though, so Fuji was uncertain of what the stare might mean. But it seemed like that certain look became more frequent lately. And somehow he felt certain warmth from that stare.
Yet he still had no idea of how to interpret the stare.
-ooTBCoo-
A/N: So, how was it? Hope you like the opening XD
I actually had finished this story but I may make some adjustment depends on the responds, so please do review and tell me what you think, ne?
Chapter two will be accompanied by a fanart ^___^
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You say you finished the story? Can I ask for a favor? would you send it to me? I'm leaving on vacation for a month on Sunday and I would love to read it before I go. If you don't want to or it's too much trouble, don't worry. I understand :) Thank you!
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And sorry for the grammar. english isn't my first language and I don't have beta-editor. but I'll try to check and fix if I could..
could yu point the mistakes? ^^;;;
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English isn't my first language either. So I know what you are going through. I suggest trying to get a beta, they are great and you learn a whole lot from them. What's your first language?
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My first language is Indonesian. and you?
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Oh, and I've sent the email ^__^
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The last few lines about Tezuka's stares seem to bring in an introduction to Tezuka's feelings, which is great.
Good job, and update soon! :D
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and forgive me for the grammar >.<
I'll try to re-check my file and hope I'll find a beta before updating ^^;;
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Is in thorough need of fluff, apparently... XD
Anyway, this has a very interesting start. Cheers!
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Fluff... will come up soon.. heheh XD
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Will try to update soon XD
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Good start! ^^ Update soon! Can't wait for the fanart as well~
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Fanart on-progress
will update as soon as I can ^__^
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You make me so interested^____^
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glad you're interested XD
I was afraid that this wasn't gonna work ^^;;
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please read the next chapter too once I updated it ^___^
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Interesting. The silent conversations were a great idea. *hugs and hearts*
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Will update soon,, XD
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like it.will continue reading
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Haha.. I don't know people still read these old stuff ^^;
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Btw, kamu orang indonesia kan? Salam kenal ya...
kaze
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And if I may suggest, check my TeFu fics that are listed in my fic recs on my sidebar. I have more confidence in those rather than my older stuff XD;
And yup, saya orang Indo. Salam kenal juga :D
Di fandom ini ada beberapa penulis Indo bagus juga loh, seperti
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Dia kan suka KKM juga.. So, I read her Kyou kara maou story...
Trus, well, sebenarnya gw mulai baca TeFu gara2 fics nya dia. Setelah gw selesai ngabisin fics KKM nya, gw ngeliat karya dia yang lain.
Well, I'm a little bit interested in her TeFu fics...Ya udah gw coba2 aj,, eh ternyata malah jadi suka beneran, hahaha
Kesimpulannya: gara2 baca fanfics dia makanya gw jadi suka TeFu ^__^...begitulah
demonessryu baru mulai gw baca kemaren tuh... Gw blm ngabisin punya lo dan punya dia..Baru isumi aja yang habis... Yah, dalam waktu dekat sih pasti bakal gw lahap semuanya lah..ehehehe
Well, can we become friends? I want us to become mutual friends ^__^.. And it's nice if I can get to know you and others well
best regards
kaze
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Fic2nya Ryu kalo ga crack, pr0n ya angsty abis kan? Good luck de kalo mo ngelahap angst-nya dia sekaligus XD
Dulu ada 1 fic dia judulnya 'Lost in Time' yg bikin Isu ngaco pas ujian dan gw ga bisa nulis seminggu karna ga mood XD;
Kalo pas ngelahap fic gw komen yah? Hehe, I love comments XD
And sure we can, tadi dah gw add balik kok :)
Yay friends XD
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Btw, pron, crack tuh apa? Kadang2 suka ada singkatan di ff yang bikin gw bingung. Gw perlu waktu 1/2 tahun sebelum tau AU itu alter universe, wakakak...*such an ignorant human*
Kalo angst, ini agak membingungkan juga. Sedih, dan suka ada yang mati. Tapi bukannya kalo mati tuh masuk kategori tragedy yah...Bingung aje...
Ok, ok, ntar gw komen balik... Btw, lo tinggal di mana? gw di jakarta....
See yaa... (kalo ada pertanyaan private, pm aj yah)
kaze
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crack tu humor tapi yg parah.. maksudnya kek.. mmh. Ryuzaki-sensei pake bikini, Tezuka crossdress. Kalo humor kan msh lebih mild.
En lebih tepatnya AU tu Alternate Universe ^^
Ada lagi PWP = Porn Without Plot, atau sering diplesetin jadi Plot? What Plot? XD
Angst itu yang sifatnya lebih introspektif daripada deskriptif. Jadi kek si tokoh utama ini perasaannya diubek2. Kalo drama lebih menekankan di interaksi antara 2 karakter yg menciptakan konflik. Death bisa masuk angst juga kalo dilihat dari PoV yg introspektif. Tapi kalo matinya parah kek terbunuh atau kecelakaan bisa masuk tragedy.
Sip2 komennya ditunggu :p
Gw juga di Jakarta, di Bintaro. Kalo Isu di Pasar Minggu, hehe. Biasanya kalo gw ktmuan ma dia di PIM XD
See ya~
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Bintaro? Jauh juga yaa.. Gw di Pulo Mas, Jak-Tim.. Deket kelapa gading...
Hmm, kalo Pasar Minggu sih tiap hari gw lewatin, kalo naik kereta mo kuliah...
Btw, lo pelajar, mahasiswa, ato kerja?
Isu tuh sepupu lo yah? Kyknya deket banget..Asik juga yah, kalo orang dari internet bisa ketemuan beneran, face-to-face...
best regards
kaze
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Gw lagi cuti kuliah, mo nerusin k Singapore November ntar ^^
Tapi sempet d Psikologi UI angkatan '05
Gak, Isu bkn sepupu gw, gw jg kenalnya dr internet. Dia ktnya suka bgt ma fic2 gw, tp pas baru knal, dy msh d US, lagi student exchange. Kira2 thn lalu dia balik k Indo trus qta ktmuan ptama kali. Sejak itu sering kontak si, en kadang ktmuan sama telponan XD
Tahun ini dy baru msk UI ^^
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Gw juga di UI, Teknik Industri '08
Hmm, dia anak baru donk kalo gitu...
Ketemu di Detos aj kalo nggak.. Wakakak....
Singapore ambil jurusan apa?
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Aih, gw kan cuti, ga ngampus. Jauh bo Bintaro-Depok XD
Kecuali gw bs nginep lg d rmh Isu biz itu, tp ga yakin. Hawhaw. PS aj uda *nudge nudge* XD
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Gila, kita ngobrol via comment , wakakak....
Lo di Singapore mo ngambil jurusan apa?
PS? waah, gw pake busway donk ke sana.....ahahaha
Hmm, mungkin kali yaa...
O ya, lo merayakan lebaran? ga pulang kampung?
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Hmm, gw nemu LJ lo dari mana yaa?? Ooh, gw inget!!
Kan gw gabung ke beberapa komunitas LJ khusus TeFu kyk cactuscontinuum dsb... Trus pas gw baca fic orang lain, gw sempet ngeliat nama lo jadi salah satu reviewer nya.. Beberapa hal yang menarik minat gw adalah:
1. Lo me-review fic TeFu buatan orang
2. Avatar lo bergambar TeFu
3. Fakta sederhana bahwa (berdasarkan pengalaman), avatar yang gambarnya pasangan atau tokoh yang disukai itu berarti pemiliknya biasanya penulis fanfic atau penggambar fanart yang berhubungan dengan pasangan / tokoh yang disukai
4. Biasanya yang kyk gitu2 bakal gw buka LJ nya, dan well, sejauh ini hipotesis gw terbukti tepat XD XD
5. kesimpulan: Lo adalah penulis TeFu fics
Cukup ilmiah, bukan? *wink*
Pemakaian logika sederhana bisa menghasilkan kepuasan optimal ^__^
best regards,
kaze
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Kalo nggak, kan kadang suka ada tuh halaman "this fic is dedicated to....whatever"... naah, kadang gw juga ngeliat dari situ.. Kayak lo ngomong "Fic ini buat hadiah ultahnya isumi" ato "untuk *blalbla* yang fic-nya menginspirasi gw buat nulis ttg TeFu juga"
See... kalo orang perhatian, ada banyak petunjuknya kok, tersebar di mana2
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