That was a great opening chapter. Apart from the slight grammatical mistakes from time to time, the story was really interesting! I like the aspect of the silent communication showing their close bond.
The last few lines about Tezuka's stares seem to bring in an introduction to Tezuka's feelings, which is great.
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The last few lines about Tezuka's stares seem to bring in an introduction to Tezuka's feelings, which is great.
Good job, and update soon! :D