I love every single second that passed when I read this. Seriously. And therefore I'll start with a criticism. *is bricked* Alright, it's not your best--the usual impact that's always in your fic is barely there, I dunno, but it... feels strangely empty. I think that's the writer's block playing on you, though. Your word choices in this one isn't elaborate, though it doesn't really interfere with the humor and the overall tone of the drabble.
That aside. FFFFFFFFFFFFFFF THE MERE IDEA OF KANDA HAVING A 'MEET-THE-PARENTS' WITH CROS IS FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF OH OH MY GOD *rofl* Seriously. I love this for that, and for your perfect Cross. I seriously loved how he managed to keep being--uhh, being Cross?--but at the same time it's apparent that he's looking after Allen's well-being. Even when he just left the room and told Allen to clean up, oh my. *grins* AND CLUELESS!KANDA WINS MY HEART. I dunno, but it just seems so logical to me that Allen would know way more stuff about A/B/C stuff that Kanda would. So yeah, IC-ness is always loved. <3333333333
>>>"You're sure he'd be able to top you?" asjdgajsdgawuydgasj OHMYGOD THIS THIS THIS *rofl-ing so hard* Even though your description in this drabble is a bit off compared to the usual, but the dialogues are made of WIN. Honest. I'm very nearly swearing in laughter right now--which I can't do since mOm's behind me. Ahahahaha SHHHHHHHH----- seriously~~~!!!
And the bits where Kanda just kind of put his hand on Allen's to calm him? Total love. I actually like that part better than the part when they kissed, but it's Yullen so everything's all well~~~!!!! xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Ngggg~~ sorry if my criticism gets you mad--I really enjoyed this, though, seriously. *grins*
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I love every single second that passed when I read this. Seriously. And therefore I'll start with a criticism. *is bricked* Alright, it's not your best--the usual impact that's always in your fic is barely there, I dunno, but it... feels strangely empty. I think that's the writer's block playing on you, though. Your word choices in this one isn't elaborate, though it doesn't really interfere with the humor and the overall tone of the drabble.
That aside. FFFFFFFFFFFFFFF THE MERE IDEA OF KANDA HAVING A 'MEET-THE-PARENTS' WITH CROS IS FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF OH OH MY GOD *rofl* Seriously. I love this for that, and for your perfect Cross. I seriously loved how he managed to keep being--uhh, being Cross?--but at the same time it's apparent that he's looking after Allen's well-being. Even when he just left the room and told Allen to clean up, oh my. *grins* AND CLUELESS!KANDA WINS MY HEART. I dunno, but it just seems so logical to me that Allen would know way more stuff about A/B/C stuff that Kanda would. So yeah, IC-ness is always loved. <3333333333
>>>"You're sure he'd be able to top you?"
asjdgajsdgawuydgasj OHMYGOD THIS THIS THIS *rofl-ing so hard* Even though your description in this drabble is a bit off compared to the usual, but the dialogues are made of WIN. Honest. I'm very nearly swearing in laughter right now--which I can't do since mOm's behind me. Ahahahaha SHHHHHHHH----- seriously~~~!!!
And the bits where Kanda just kind of put his hand on Allen's to calm him? Total love.
I actually like that part better than the part when they kissed, but it's Yullen so everything's all well~~~!!!!xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDNgggg~~ sorry if my criticism gets you mad--I really enjoyed this, though, seriously. *grins*